The Shooting Star ( Poem )


Look  there , in the sky,
A shooting star saying goodbye,

It's coming down,falling from height,
Leaving behind a streak of light,

We for a while, can see that line,
For some more time,can feel star's shine.
                                                                 -Aunt Mary
                                                              

15 comments:

  1. There are not many things as exciting as seeing a shooting star are there? :)

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    1. You are right , the shooting stars are wonderful , thank you very much for visiting me :)

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  2. Nicely written. I love seeing a shooting star. :)

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    1. Your words mean a lot to me , thank you so much Balqis :)

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  3. Hurry up!! Think about a new desire!! It will become true, but you must think it before the shooting star blows out of the sky!

    Beautiful poem, Auntie!!!

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    1. I did not make a wish on shooting star for my whole life, but many people do that. Thank you so much Od , happy that you liked the poem :)

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  4. That's so sweet of you , thank's Joy :)

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  5. Lovely and a perfect length for little ones.

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  6. Lovely poem & Tracy is quite right about the length it’s perfect.

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    1. Thank you Barbara , I am so happy that you liked it :)

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