BIRD OF TIME ( Poem)

 
                                       
                                          Bird of time is flying so fast,
                                 all days present, turned into past ..                                                                       seasons came and seasons gone,  
                                 years have passed one by one..
   .                                  days disappeared, moments gone,
                                time is moving on and on...    
                                who can make the time stay?
                                it is going... just it's way. 
                                                                  -Aunt Mary 

19 comments:

  1. Very true, Aunt Mary.
    Seasons came and seasons gone!
    Again, i love the rhymes!

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    1. Thank you Ric for reading and liking :)

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  2. I love the rhymes.
    Yes, time is gold, it is never coming back. So we have to enjoy every minute of it.
    Have a nice weekend Aunt Mary:)

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    1. You are so right , thank's a lot joy :)

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  3. Love your poem. Time is very precious in all our life. Need to use it in proper way...

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    1. Yes that's true. Thank you very much for reading and visiting :)

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  4. That bird of time flies really fast this time of year doesn't she?? :)

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    1. Yes she is very fast , thank you so much :)

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  5. Lovely rhyme Mary! Feels good reading this.

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    1. Good to see you after a long time my friend , I a so glad that you liked the poem :)

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  6. How true that is. The days and weeks just rush past, I enjoyed your rhyme.

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    1. I am so happy that you liked it , thanks Barbara :)

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    2. Thanks for coming to visit me today Aunt Mary, I always enjoy hearing from you.

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  7. This bird of time flies fast or slow as per the feelings of the audience.

    Sometimes it goes so fast we cannot see it, and other it lingers until we cannot kill it!!

    But anyway, years go away and we find ourselves combing silver strands before we realise we are over our time.

    Your rhyme is just to the point, Auntie!

    I love it!

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    1. You are right , I tried to make it to the point . You understand me well .
      Thank you so very much Od, you are always a big support :)

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  8. Time simply keeps on going on it's way. Beautiful composition !!

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    1. Yes Jahid , thank's a lot for the kind visit and and words :)

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  9. It's indeed a good rhyme, Aunt Mary. :)

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